daring, ambitious, supercilious
“Now it’s your turn, you can change the world ... Dream, don’t be afraid ...Dream ... And everything will be possible “
And then: “BOOM”... I woke up shaking, with sweat dripping down my forehead. What was this dream about? Who was this man and why did that feel so real? "

[02:08:07] Ghedira: okay so let's skip the introduction part
[02:08:29] oblako_cloud: okay
[02:08:45] oblako_cloud: so - without looking at the text for the second time - a question
[02:08:51] oblako_cloud: what is the 'boom' about?
[02:08:58] oblako_cloud: did smth blow up?
[02:09:35] Ghedira: I had a dream
[02:09:37] Ghedira: I woke up
[02:09:37] Ghedira: lol
[02:09:54] oblako_cloud: yes. and where did the 'boom' occur?
[02:10:05] oblako_cloud: in other words, WHAT BLEW UP?!
[02:10:11] Ghedira: nothing
[02:10:17] Ghedira: I just want to make a transition
[02:10:19] oblako_cloud: so why did you use that word?
[02:10:21] Ghedira: between the dreaml
[02:10:25] Ghedira: and the reality
[02:10:34] Ghedira: just to say that I woke up
[02:10:43] Ghedira: confused
[02:10:47] oblako_cloud: okay... but the 'boom' suggests a violent transition, don't you think?
[02:10:57] oblako_cloud: and there is no violence anywhere in your essay
[02:11:23] oblako_cloud: it just stands there, in capital letters - a solid proof that you read too many guides on writing an essay of this type ><'
[02:12:20] Ghedira: okay, so what should I do?
[02:12:22] Ghedira: delete it?
[02:12:24] Ghedira: how do I make the transition
[02:13:28] oblako_cloud: absolutely. delete it and forget about it.

Умываю ручки. А то сейчас помогу ему с этим дурацким сочинением. И потом сама буду выть, почему же мы сталкиваемся с такой дряной политикой. Умываю ручки.